不治之药
A downloadable game for Windows, macOS, and Linux
——现在有英文版本了，特别感谢 @t0rtlet0rtle 的英文翻译。:)
— Now available in English, special thanks to @t0rtlet0rtle for the English translation. :)
■ 简介：
你，一个除了身体病弱以外没什么缺点的校园优等生。
——向平时被你欺凌的受害者少年，告白了。
…… ……
好的？那又怎样？
这不是你所做过的最糟糕的决定。
■ 警告：
- 主角不是好人，名字与性别由玩家自行决定；
- yandere/校园欺凌/角色死亡/不健康的情感关系/可能引起不安的描写、图像、音效；
- 耗时三天写出的简单剧本。
——如果不擅长以上要素，请及时退出。
■ Warning
* The main character is not a good person, name and gender are at the discretion of the player.
* yandere / school bullying / character death / unhealthy emotional relationships / potentially disturbing depictions, images, sound effects.
* A simple script that took three days to write. Need to experience all the routes to get the full story.
-- If you are not good at the above, please don't push yourself and quit in time.
■ 结局数：6
- — 3个坏结局
- — 普通结局
- — 好结局
- — 真结局 （密码顺序：坏结局123、普通结局、好结局）
■ Number of endings: 6
* - 3 Bad endings
* - Normal ending
* - Good ending
* - True ending (password order: bad ending 123, normal ending, good ending)
■ 长度：
短篇，21000字。
■ 制作周期：
两个星期左右。文本、美术、代码由作者独立完成。
■ 须知：
- 从零开始学习renpy的作品，主要用于测试代码。
- 个人爱好，请温柔对待。
- 游戏人物的观点均不代表作者观点，这是完全虚构的故事，与现实无关。
■ 如何制作游戏：renpy
- 剧本：我
- cg/立绘：我
- 编程：我
- 音乐素材提供：Pocket Sound；甘茶の音楽工房；魔王魂
- 背景素材提供：Minchirie；MoonWind；winddorf
■ 制作感想：
真心话大冒险输掉之后被要求做出来的病娇游戏，有不少突击展开。
主角性别不定，当作 otome 和 bl 玩都可以。
再也不写日轻和校园和第一人称了写得想死。
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- 问题回答（包含剧透） & 感谢下载数量700+次Mar 13, 2023
- 简易攻略 & 感谢下载数量160+次Dec 24, 2022
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probably one of my favorite visual novels :)
!!! this story is so....... it made me feel so many emotions. i played this vn originally to take my mind off of things, but i ended up playing for more than an hour.
SPOILERS!!
im really both.... horrified and perplexed and also extremely at awe at how you write MC. im scared of MC, honestly. when you said mc wasn't a good person I genuinely thought of grey morality at most, but i really wasn't expecting a fully fleshed out bully for (at least, in MC's perspective) a helpless naive puppy. I felt so bad honestly, I felt genuine moral questioning over my fictional actions and thoughts, as if I was truly thinking such evil thoughts. I hated MC a lot, and that's a compliment for your writing.
Naturally I chose the 'kindest' options because of how bad I felt for Hoshino. In real life, I'd probably be actually friends with a guy like him. The more I played, the more I realized how fucked up and pitiful both sides are, it's just extremely... confusing for my emotions to process all of this. Both have suffered with so much abuse and yet handled it in a way that I'd say is like the two sides of the same coin. Both are lucid with their actions, and they both don't have any means to become better. They've fully accepted the results of the abuse they have received (or done) and they welcome it with open arms to the point that I question;
If abuse is in neither's system, who are they really? Can they even be a person out of the cycle of abuse anymore? It's hard to imagine.
When they're apart, all hell breaks loose. When they're together, they might as well as spiral and kill whatever remains of each other, whether metaphorically or literally.
As I'm writing this, I have yet to do the True ending (I was stupid and didn't track my progress, hehe). But I can feel the excitement, dread, and fear all muddling into adrenaline. I can't wait to see more of your works.
EDIT: I finished playing. True ending and everything........ ah im so depressed.
someone helpb what is the passwords
didu gind it
I love it. I hope this game will be translted on Russian, cause i want it to be popular. Its really what i was born to :3
i cried when he said "godbye MC i love u" in the true ending, it felt too real! i wont forget him,i love him! thanks for the great game.
SENHOR QUE JOGO BOM! Era exatamente oque eu estava procurando em um jogo. Levei mais ou menos duas horas para zerar, a única coisa q não me agradou tanto foi o som do jogo q não funcionou no fone, não sei se é porque eu usei o Joiplay ou se culpa do meu celular.
OH DIOS MIO, EL TRUE ENDING ES TAN ???? LO AMO
this is so cool
omg nyancat
love the artstyle
I've played through this thing so many times and the fact that I can not for the life of me Figure out how to do the third bad ending is getting me a little Frustrated. Are you able to let give me a few hints on to what things I should click in order to get the Third bad endings
Edit/编辑: 我已经玩过这个游戏很多次了，事实上我一生都无法弄清楚如何做第三个坏结局，这让我有点沮丧。你能否给我一些提示，告诉我应该点击哪些内容才能获得第三个坏结局
And now like an idiot I've gone ahead and delete it even the code, God I was SO close to finishing the game.
I like your game it's just annoying to try to get the ending
Edit/编辑: 现在我像个白痴一样继续删除它，甚至连代码都删除了，上帝啊，我已经快要完成游戏了。
我喜欢你的游戏，只是试图得到结局很烦人
I'm an English speaker so I'm using Google Translate I'm sorry if it sounds weird to you
我是说英语的人，所以我使用谷歌翻译 如果你觉得这听起来很奇怪，我很抱歉
I got the third bad ending by going to Hoshino's house.
你好！我是一位土耳其语翻译者，我可以翻译这个游戏吗？
真的很喜欢大人的这款作品，。。。。。。。。总之爱你无言以表
问问大大什么时候出安卓版的？(╥﹏╥)🌹
对妈妈说的每一句话都戳中我。。。啊啊啊我们东亚小孩
感谢制作！！！
啊啊啊好棒的游戏～MC和星野二人的相当不健康&相互憎恨又相互依存的关系很有趣，而且里面有一些相当富有哲学性质的对话读起来很有意思，最终真结局的反转也是意料之外，情理之中！
不得不说有中文的游戏还是比读英文生肉玩起来流畅多了～虽然我自己不是一个病娇爱好者，但是玩起来也收获了足够的快乐:D 再次感谢大大制作！
感謝大大的製作！玩了好想畫裏面的場景（雖然玩的時候一直講有病 咳咳兩個角色都講有大病）
我把跟朋友玩的游戲過程發了youtube不過全程很多廢話
這裏！
嘿嘿嘿我画完了
I'm just confused about that one thing what exactly did the mc tell his uncle?
and how exactly did he say the mc was lying to them?
mc think he will leave with his aunt,so they told his uncle this thing,so that he can stay here and never leave,from that,he ONLY belongs to mc. (I haven't play the English version,so I don't kown how to reply your second question)
your artstyle is very beautiful!! the game is also very good, and i liked that MC was not a good person too!! i hope you can make more games like this (*￣▽￣)b
真的好喜欢！很少找到中文创造者的游戏，还是病娇向的ヽ(；▽；)ノ太好了，大大很厉害，希望能玩到更多您的作品！剧情很棒也很连贯，每个结局都很喜欢呢！
感谢你的游玩和评论！尽管是独自制作的娱乐作品，能得到你这番评价我很高兴。
⁽⁽ଘ ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
感谢咪！！《不治之药》和《来份夜宵吗》都很非常非常好！（ps：真的很少能找到中文病娇游，不用啃生肉的我留下感动的泪水(//w//)
感谢你的游玩！也感谢你能喜欢。括号里的话很能产生共鸣，我偶尔也会寻找这种类型的游戏……想体验到更多中文制作者的作品啊。(*/ω＼*)
i made an account just to write this comment, i absolutely adore this game. both hoshino and mc are rather complex, flawed, and interesting characters, their disturbing dynamic that bordered on obsession was very intriguing to me, and i couldnt seem to get enough of it. the illustrations are quite good, too. i evenwent as far as to draw hoshino in my sketchbook.
thank you for creating this game. it invoked dozens of unfathomable feelings from in me. i will definitely be looking forward to your future projects being translated in english. ૮ ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ ა
drawing hoshino in your sketchbook is so cute 🥹
thank you!!
Wow, thanks for playing this game! Your compliments are so lovely, in every way. Also, I'd love to see your paintings. Could you please email it to me? (=´ω`=)
【frozen-iris@hotmail.com】
A wonderful game. By far the most interesting aspect to me was the MC though, as I've always enjoyed when any type of media makes you take the pov of someone who's not exactly a good person. Everything was great though, and I look forward to playing your other projects.
Thanks for playing the game! Well, the villain's perspective was a lot of work to write, but it was also a lot of fun in a writing sense.
Interestingly, it reminded me of a friend who even angrily condemned the morality of the protagonist. Instead of offending the author, this thing made me think that the writing for this game was done okay - at least it was immersive. Haha, thanks for your comment. ε-(´∀｀ )
I waited so long for the English translation and when I found out it's finally in English, I was so happy .
I just finished the game. There are so many things I felt, horror, happiness, shock, and relief with a bunch of other feelings. If I had to describe this game to someone I wouldn't even try to, there are not enough words for me to express the feelings, to tell the story from the beginning to the 'end'. I still can't process some things that happened there, a few things I couldn't even understand but I like it that way, not knowing everything seems better than knowing everything.
One of the few games I couldn't stop reading and had to finish. I hope we can get more translations from this author, this work by them is truly amazing.
Thank you for the compliment.I'm happy that my work has caused you much emotion.To be honest, I couldn't agree more with "not knowing everything seems better than knowing everything". Whether I'm writing for myself or playing other games, I'm partial to the dreamy, emotional outbursts of the plot.
As I was conceptualizing it, I was also thinking: how do I write a script to achieve an unexpected effect? My active mind always presupposes too many outcomes. Thinking too much is sometimes an advantage and sometimes a burden - that's why I enjoy shifting my mood by creating stories and socializing with others. ;-)
Thanks again for enjoying the game, it means a lot to me.ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭
特别好的作品！我很喜欢！主角二人早已是那种彼此依赖，互为精神寄托的存在了，无论最后是“我”主导，还是星野主导，都别有一番风味。总而言之，玩下来非常喜欢，但我有一个疑问，最后真结局的解锁是需要各个结局的密码组合在一起，我想请问每个结局的密码有什么含义吗？以及最后那个排列方式。还是说密码是您随机想的？？
哇，谢谢你的评论！结局的密码数字只有99（坏结局1）和01（好结局）是特意设定的，其他都由骰子随机掷出结果。
坏结局1是我最先设计好、写作最满意的结局，也是象征着即将到达终点却仍留下悬念的结局，所以数字是99。
好结局很容易获得。通关后就能意识到：它是一切故事的起点。外表很治愈…实际上是万恶之源。所以数字是01。
谢谢你提问了这个问题！真的很高兴玩家能注意到。(〃´∀｀)
This game was so good!!
I loved how you had to learn about the lore and everything before getting to the true ending // Also I love how the true ending isn't a really negative ending nor a really positive one, but its realistic.
I love love psychological horror visual novels and I think this one had to have been the coolest one yet!!
I love how the Main Character + Hoshino both have flaws and are both equally messed up, so the viewers don't know who to root for ^^.
Ending three was quite hard to get, but I loved it because it allowed me to explore the dialogue options.
Thank you so much for making this game, It was amazing <3!!
Thank you for the compliment. (=´ω`=)
That’s very kind of you! I’m glad you enjoyed it so much.I wanted the true ending to have a sort of bittersweet feeling to it.It was a tricky beast to write.The third bad ending has to do with two values, so it's harder to get. But I had a lot of satisfaction writing this ending, and it achieved the effect I wanted.
I’m glad you liked how I portrayed both MC and Hoshino.The more I write this story, the more complex I want the characters to be.Sure, their personalities may have flaws, but I wanted them all to be interesting and touching to the player.
Finally, thanks again for enjoying the game! <3
！！相当喜欢的游戏，篇幅不长可是角色塑造好棒（虽然偶尔会被吓一跳
感谢游玩和留下评论！抱歉吓到你了…下次一定会注意标好恐怖游戏的tag，相信我。谢谢你喜欢这个游戏。;-)
the game is sooooo amazing
i liked that we have to know the character befor inloking the true ending
aand he's ssooooo hansoom
you are a good artist becose his desine i unique and beatiful
thx for making this game i really enjoy it ^-^
Thank you for playing the game and leaving a comment! I hope the true ending is surprising enough, haha. Glad to see you enjoyed the game.
(*´ω`*)
ofcourse the true ending was so amazing
thax for making such a good game
I love dark stories like this! The character art is really good~ Got the good ending on my first time playing and I'm going to try for the others.
The English translation is also well done! You and your friend done a good job c:
Wow, thank you so much for your complimentary comment!I also think the writing of the English translation is quite beautiful.(*´∀`)
虽然整个游戏的流程很短，差不多一个小时就能收集全结局了，但是我想至少直到今年结束我都不会忘记两位主角的故事了，星野的脸已经深深烙印在我的脑海里了
哦还有，不论是游戏还是现实，邪教真是害人不浅啊
感谢通关和评论！得到这样的评价我能开心很久，因为作者的创作就是想写被人记住的故事。谢谢你！(ゝ∀･)
妈咪。。。。。。真的好喜欢你的作品。。。。这画风也太酷了，颜色杂而不乱，十分的绚丽，让我感觉自己嗑了药（虽然我没有真的试过就是了QAQ）而且人设还是少见的双黑主角（我不会说星野是恶人毕竟他只是采用比较极端的手段报复而已），无论站在哪一方看都可以是对方有主动权，也可以是怎么看都是心甘情愿地被对方束缚。。。我们常规意义上的be可能在他们看来也只是普普通通的ne吧。。。毕竟双方都是某种程度上的自甘堕落wwww嗑起来也太带感了
剧情节奏也把握得很好，不会太长让人觉得沉闷，也不会太短说不清楚让人感觉莫名其妙。看完了让我感觉意犹未尽
可惜的是太冷了，没有多少同人作品，好饿，饭饭（开始行乞）
感谢你的游玩和评论！画风能被这样形容我很高兴，会根据作品主题尝试不同的画法，对我来说像在做实验…能契合游戏就太好了。在构思时决定要写一个情感纠缠不清和令人印象深刻的故事，完成一个我从来没有见过/玩过的病娇游戏。不知道玩家的视角如何，当时做完工程的作者——通常乐观活跃的人竟然陷入了一两天的惆怅情绪，哈哈。:)
从正常的角度看，6个结局都有坏处；但是从制作者的角度，个人不太倾向于写作完全负面或者是完全沉闷的情节，总想留下一些希望的余地。各人有各人的理解才更有趣，所以我乐于看到大家的感想，也乐于回复。剧情节奏这方面也感谢你的评价！如果通关游戏能给你带来这些感触，我很荣幸。(*´∀`*)ﾉ
首先赞美老师的优秀制作！
非常喜欢老师的画风，很有冲击力和荒诞感！
个人很喜欢作品里对卖火柴的小女孩的引用！作为旁观者的我会觉得得星野就是某种意上的小女孩，我看他的结局并不幸的，但他可能不这么认为，至少在他每次来到自己的结局之前，我想他的大概都是看到了火苗带来的幻境一般，是满足的。
不过说起来我感觉得星野更像救了蛇后被蛇咬了的某位（），感觉主角就是有种毒蛇感，成功（？）地从爸爸妈妈那分别遗传了来自心理和身体上的疾病，天生就是毒蛇（）
最后的半开放结局我也觉得很赞！他们未来是可以预见的，但我真的对星野心理的想法感到很好奇！星野真的最后变得更冷静和正常了吗？我在游玩的过程中感觉到星野在表达对主角的情感时总是处在一些激烈的情绪中，伴随的会有一些攻击行为。我觉得最有意思的是如果星野变得正常了，考虑到曾描述过的星野其实也是聪明的人，那么星野在已经知道的主角是间接害死自己叔母的人的前提下，想复仇的话，还会在主角的药里加“料”，主角死去后完全失去所有的他很有可能还是会选择死亡的结局，但是星野如果不是真的的变正常了而是在演的话，想到真正结局之前的那些行为，结局大概还是殉情（大嘘）
另外包体的名字我也觉得很有意思hh，虽然是叫忏悔但是我没有感觉到主要角有忏悔的意图（）
总之非常感谢老师创造了这么好的作品！期待老师的下一部作品！
感谢游玩，也感谢如此长篇的评论！作者喜欢阅读文字，所以看到这么一篇细致的通关感想，我相当开心。
关于美术：使用了像做梦一样虚幻荒谬的高饱和度上色，很高兴你提到了这一点。:)
游戏中的人物都属于表里反差强烈的类型。一方面，两人的部分心理活动是被隐藏起来的（或者说，是被作者刻意删除的）；另一方面，即使是明确写出来的文字，也想营造出虚实交织的感觉。这些暗示留给玩家解读。
借用一下收到的其他玩后感：星野是典型的白切黑，看似不声不响但随时有可能炸个大的。本质上是纯白善良的人，在经历一切之后主角对他造成的影响难以磨灭，他不能假装什么事都没发生。不过，接下来具体会做什么？作者不好说。
MC的扭曲确实源于身体与精神的双重病态，一个任性敏感、在自卑与自傲的矛盾里挣扎、极度渴望安全感的恶人，不择手段地增加讨价还价的筹码来独占想要的东西。你所用的“毒蛇”的比喻很有意思，药物的极端也就是毒，就像真结局里主角明知自己的行为错误，却不会后悔。
双方都知道这是非常不健康的关系。就算目的并不纯粹，成长中的陪伴与安慰是货真价实的，这份依赖从理论上来说很难消除。因此请对结局保持自由想象！路有很多条，至于最终走向何处——还是让玩家决定吧。
最后，再一次感谢你的长评。(*´ `*)
非常感谢太太的制作！！！是本年度玩过最舒服的病娇游戏了
太太有国内的社交平台账号吗 想关注一下！
非常感谢你的游玩和评论！我不经常使用公开的网络平台，创作游戏也是一种工作之余的私人兴趣。如果想交流感想，随时欢迎你发来邮件。只要看见就会认真写回复的。ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭
The game is so good!! I hope it gets even more players, I'd love to have people to talk about this game with. I've shared this game with my friends so I could see their reactions if they unlock the true ending, to see if they'll be as shocked as I was. I love the characters in the game!! Both design-wise and story-wise!! I love how the textbox looks too, I find it really pleasing to look at. AND THE MUSIC!! I love the music you used for each part of the game!! It really fit the atmosphere and sounds like something I'd enjoy listening to even outside the game.
Overall, I really enjoyed this game a lot and I think I'll be looking forward to playing your other future and current games if they get english translations! <333
Wow, thank you for writing such a long and serious review, and I read it carefully. I was touched by your comments on the plot, the characters, the text box, and the music, especially the music: I love soft and lively piano pieces, and I'm glad we have similar musical preferences.
Regarding the English translation, I am not confident in my English writing skills, so I am grateful to the friend who was willing to help me with the translation. Seeing these comments from players, the author generated unspeakable good feelings.
(*/ω＼*)
遊戲太好玩了吧！！！我太喜歡了！！這遊戲的一切都實在是T0了。現在真的很難再看到這麼好玩的遊戲呢（哭）。謝謝你哦，fighting!!
感谢游玩！这条评论让作者有点脸红（好的意思），谢谢……fighting!!(*´ `*)
this is the first time ive ever played a game that is twisted and have the most accurate psychological horror theme, this is so good that when i played all the endings and got the true end, i was shocked, a chill ran down my spine and i feel weird, i feel sad, this is a masterpiece to me, thank you for this game.
Thanks for the comment! I do aim to shock players when I write, so I'm happy to get a review like yours. As an author, I appreciate you playing this game. (And I must also thank the friend who provided the English translation.) (*´∀`)
反转真的，太厉害了...期待2.0！
感谢游玩和评论！虽然大概率没有2.0…还是觉得这个故事的未来不应该由作者决定，请玩家自由补全吧。ヽ(○´∀`)ノ
第一次玩这种类型的游戏，感觉真的很棒！画风也很好看！
感谢游玩游戏！也谢谢你的温暖鼓励。(*´∀`)
太棒了。。简直太棒了。。。主角双方都非常有魅力，有理由的，有理智的疯，简直是我最近玩过的最对胃口的gal
太棒了。。您是神。。。
星野好可爱请杀掉我感谢通关和评论！特别是“有理由的，有理智的疯”这句评价使我有些感触。前期初看不合常理的文字，得知真相后或许会多一些不同的感受…星野的心理状态其实一直处于某个临界点，随便往哪个方向倾斜都可能酿成危险的极端，正是这种不稳定性很有趣。总之，谢谢你能喜欢他。(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭
I love this bittersweet story and Hoshino is soo cute but I can't seem to get bad end 3.
Please choose the option for MC to express annoyance and a bad attitude while maintaining Hoshino's favorability.Then it will automatically enter that ending.<3
Thank you!!! <3