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A wonderful game. By far the most interesting aspect to me was the MC though, as I've always enjoyed when any type of media makes you take the pov of someone who's not exactly a good person. Everything was great though, and I look forward to playing your other projects.

Thanks for playing the game! Well, the villain's perspective was a lot of work to write, but it was also a lot of fun in a writing sense.

Interestingly, it reminded me of a friend who even angrily condemned the morality of the protagonist. Instead of offending the author, this thing made me think that the writing for this game was done okay - at least it was immersive. Haha, thanks for your comment. ε-(´∀` )

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I waited so long for the English translation and when I found out it's finally in English, I was so happy .

I just finished the game. There are so many things I felt, horror, happiness, shock, and relief with a bunch of other feelings. If I had to describe this game to someone I wouldn't even try to, there are not enough words for me to express the feelings, to tell the story from the beginning to the 'end'. I still can't process some things that happened there, a few things I couldn't even understand but I like it that way, not knowing everything seems better than knowing everything. 

One of the few games I couldn't stop reading and had to finish. I hope we can get more translations from this author, this work by them is truly amazing.

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Thank you for the compliment.I'm happy that my work has caused you much emotion.To be honest, I couldn't agree more with "not knowing everything seems better than knowing everything". Whether I'm writing for myself or playing other games, I'm partial to the dreamy, emotional outbursts of the plot.

As I was conceptualizing it, I was also thinking: how do I write a script to achieve an unexpected effect? My active mind always presupposes too many outcomes. Thinking too much is sometimes an advantage and sometimes a burden - that's why I enjoy shifting my mood by creating stories and socializing with others. ;-)

Thanks again for enjoying the game, it means a lot to me.ଘ(ˊᵕˋ)

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特别好的作品!我很喜欢!主角二人早已是那种彼此依赖,互为精神寄托的存在了,无论最后是“我”主导,还是星野主导,都别有一番风味。总而言之,玩下来非常喜欢,但我有一个疑问,最后真结局的解锁是需要各个结局的密码组合在一起,我想请问每个结局的密码有什么含义吗?以及最后那个排列方式。还是说密码是您随机想的??

哇,谢谢你的评论!结局的密码数字只有99(坏结局1)和01(好结局)是特意设定的,其他都由骰子随机掷出结果。

坏结局1是我最先设计好、写作最满意的结局,也是象征着即将到达终点却仍留下悬念的结局,所以数字是99

好结局很容易获得。通关后就能意识到:它是一切故事的起点。外表很治愈实际上是万恶之源。所以数字是01

谢谢你提问了这个问题!真的很高兴玩家能注意到。(〃´∀`)

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This game was so good!!


I loved how you had to learn about the lore and everything before getting to the true ending // Also I love how the true ending isn't a really negative ending nor a really positive one, but its realistic.

I love love psychological horror visual novels and I think this one had to have been the coolest one yet!!

I love how the Main Character + Hoshino both have flaws and are both equally messed up, so the viewers don't know who to root for ^^.

Ending three was quite hard to get, but I loved it because it allowed me to explore the dialogue options.


Thank you so much for making this game, It was amazing <3!!

 

Thank you for the compliment. (=´ω`=)

Thats very kind of you! Im glad you enjoyed it so much.I wanted the true ending to have a sort of bittersweet feeling to it.It was a tricky beast to write.The third bad ending has to do with two values, so it's harder to get. But I had a lot of satisfaction writing this ending, and it achieved the effect I wanted.

Im glad you liked how I portrayed both MC and Hoshino.The more I write this story, the more complex I want the characters to be.Sure, their personalities may have flaws, but I wanted them all to be interesting and touching to the player.

Finally, thanks again for enjoying the game! <3

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!!相当喜欢的游戏,篇幅不长可是角色塑造好棒(虽然偶尔会被吓一跳

感谢游玩和留下评论!抱歉吓到你了…下次一定会注意标好恐怖游戏的tag,相信我。谢谢你喜欢这个游戏。;-)

the game is sooooo amazing 

i liked that we have to know the character befor inloking the true ending

aand he's ssooooo hansoom 

you are a good artist becose his desine i unique and beatiful

thx for making this game i really enjoy it ^-^

Thank you for playing the game and leaving a comment! I hope the true ending is surprising enough, haha. Glad to see you enjoyed the game.

(*´ω`*)

ofcourse the true ending was so amazing 

thax for making such a good game

I love dark stories like this! The character art is really good~ Got the good ending on my first time playing and I'm going to try for the others.

The English translation is also well done! You and your friend done a good job c:

Wow, thank you so much for your complimentary comment!I also think the writing of the English translation is quite beautiful.(*´∀`)

虽然整个游戏的流程很短,差不多一个小时就能收集全结局了,但是我想至少直到今年结束我都不会忘记两位主角的故事了,星野的脸已经深深烙印在我的脑海里了

哦还有,不论是游戏还是现实,邪教真是害人不浅啊

感谢通关和评论!得到这样的评价我能开心很久,因为作者的创作就是想写被人记住的故事。谢谢你!(ゝ∀・)

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妈咪。。。。。。真的好喜欢你的作品。。。。这画风也太酷了,颜色杂而不乱,十分的绚丽,让我感觉自己嗑了药(虽然我没有真的试过就是了QAQ)而且人设还是少见的双黑主角(我不会说星野是恶人毕竟他只是采用比较极端的手段报复而已),无论站在哪一方看都可以是对方有主动权,也可以是怎么看都是心甘情愿地被对方束缚。。。我们常规意义上的be可能在他们看来也只是普普通通的ne吧。。。毕竟双方都是某种程度上的自甘堕落wwww嗑起来也太带感了

剧情节奏也把握得很好,不会太长让人觉得沉闷,也不会太短说不清楚让人感觉莫名其妙。看完了让我感觉意犹未尽

可惜的是太冷了,没有多少同人作品,好饿,饭饭(开始行乞)

感谢你的游玩和评论!画风能被这样形容我很高兴,会根据作品主题尝试不同的画法,对我来说像在做实验能契合游戏就太好了。在构思时决定要写一个情感纠缠不清和令人印象深刻的故事,完成一个我从来没有见过/玩过的病娇游戏。不知道玩家的视角如何,当时做完工程的作者——通常乐观活跃的人竟然陷入了一两天的惆怅情绪,哈哈。:)

从正常的角度看,6个结局都有坏处;但是从制作者的角度,个人不太倾向于写作完全负面或者是完全沉闷的情节,总想留下一些希望的余地。各人有各人的理解才更有趣,所以我乐于看到大家的感想,也乐于回复。剧情节奏这方面也感谢你的评价!如果通关游戏能给你带来这些感触,我很荣幸。(`*)ノ

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首先赞美老师的优秀制作!

非常喜欢老师的画风,很有冲击力和荒诞感!

个人很喜欢作品里对卖火柴的小女孩的引用!作为旁观者的我会觉得得星野就是某种意上的小女孩,我看他的结局并不幸的,但他可能不这么认为,至少在他每次来到自己的结局之前,我想他的大概都是看到了火苗带来的幻境一般,是满足的。

不过说起来我感觉得星野更像救了蛇后被蛇咬了的某位(),感觉主角就是有种毒蛇感,成功(?)地从爸爸妈妈那分别遗传了来自心理和身体上的疾病,天生就是毒蛇()

最后的半开放结局我也觉得很赞!他们未来是可以预见的,但我真的对星野心理的想法感到很好奇!星野真的最后变得更冷静和正常了吗?我在游玩的过程中感觉到星野在表达对主角的情感时总是处在一些激烈的情绪中,伴随的会有一些攻击行为。我觉得最有意思的是如果星野变得正常了,考虑到曾描述过的星野其实也是聪明的人,那么星野在已经知道的主角是间接害死自己叔母的人的前提下,想复仇的话,还会在主角的药里加“料”,主角死去后完全失去所有的他很有可能还是会选择死亡的结局,但是星野如果不是真的的变正常了而是在演的话,想到真正结局之前的那些行为,结局大概还是殉情(大嘘)

另外包体的名字我也觉得很有意思hh,虽然是叫忏悔但是我没有感觉到主要角有忏悔的意图()

总之非常感谢老师创造了这么好的作品!期待老师的下一部作品!

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感谢游玩,也感谢如此长篇的评论!作者喜欢阅读文字,所以看到这么一篇细致的通关感想,我相当开心。

关于美术:使用了像做梦一样虚幻荒谬的高饱和度上色,很高兴你提到了这一点。:)

游戏中的人物都属于表里反差强烈的类型。一方面,两人的部分心理活动是被隐藏起来的(或者说,是被作者刻意删除的);另一方面,即使是明确写出来的文字,也想营造出虚实交织的感觉。这些暗示留给玩家解读。

借用一下收到的其他玩后感:星野是典型的白切黑,看似不声不响但随时有可能炸个大的。本质上是纯白善良的人,在经历一切之后主角对他造成的影响难以磨灭,他不能假装什么事都没发生。不过,接下来具体会做什么?作者不好说。

MC的扭曲确实源于身体与精神的双重病态,一个任性敏感、在自卑与自傲的矛盾里挣扎、极度渴望安全感的恶人,不择手段地增加讨价还价的筹码来独占想要的东西。你所用的“毒蛇”的比喻很有意思,药物的极端也就是毒,就像真结局里主角明知自己的行为错误,却不会后悔。

双方都知道这是非常不健康的关系。就算目的并不纯粹,成长中的陪伴与安慰是货真价实的,这份依赖从理论上来说很难消除。因此请对结局保持自由想象!路有很多条,至于最终走向何处——还是让玩家决定吧。

最后,再一次感谢你的长评。(*´  `*)

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非常感谢太太的制作!!!是本年度玩过最舒服的病娇游戏了

太太有国内的社交平台账号吗 想关注一下!

非常感谢你的游玩和评论!我不经常使用公开的网络平台,创作游戏也是一种工作之余的私人兴趣。如果想交流感想,随时欢迎你发来邮件。只要看见就会认真写回复的。ଘ(ˊᵕˋ)

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The game is so good!! I hope it gets even more players, I'd love to have people to talk about this game with. I've shared this game with my friends so I could see their reactions if they unlock the true ending, to see if they'll be as shocked as I was. I love the characters in the game!! Both design-wise and story-wise!! I love how the textbox looks too, I find it really pleasing to look at. AND THE MUSIC!! I love the music you used for each part of the game!! It really fit the atmosphere and sounds like something I'd enjoy listening to even outside the game.

Overall, I really enjoyed this game a lot and I think I'll be looking forward to playing your other future and current games if they get english translations! <333

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Wow, thank you for writing such a long and serious review, and I read it carefully. I was touched by your comments on the plot, the characters, the text box, and the music, especially the music: I love soft and lively piano pieces, and I'm glad we have similar musical preferences.

Regarding the English translation, I am not confident in my English writing skills, so I am grateful to the friend who was willing to help me with the translation. Seeing these comments from players, the author generated unspeakable good feelings.

(*/ω\*)

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遊戲太好玩了吧!!!我太喜歡了!!這遊戲的一切都實在是T0了。現在真的很難再看到這麼好玩的遊戲呢(哭)。謝謝你哦,fighting!!

感谢游玩!这条评论让作者有点脸红(好的意思),谢谢……fighting!!(  `*)

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this is the first time ive ever played a game that is twisted and have the most accurate psychological horror theme, this is so good that when i played all the endings and got the true end, i was shocked, a chill ran down my spine and i feel weird, i feel sad, this is a masterpiece to me, thank you for this game.

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Thanks for the comment! I do aim to shock players when I write, so I'm happy to get a review like yours. As an author, I appreciate you playing this game. (And I must also thank the friend who provided the English translation.) (`)

反转真的,太厉害了...期待2.0!

感谢游玩和评论!虽然大概率没有2.0还是觉得这个故事的未来不应该由作者决定,请玩家自由补全吧。ヽ(○´`)ノ

第一次玩这种类型的游戏,感觉真的很棒!画风也很好看!

感谢游玩游戏!也谢谢你的温暖鼓励。(*´∀`)

太棒了。。简直太棒了。。。主角双方都非常有魅力,有理由的,有理智的疯,简直是我最近玩过的最对胃口的gal

太棒了。。您是神。。。

星野好可爱请杀掉我

感谢通关和评论!特别是“有理由的,有理智的疯”这句评价使我有些感触。前期初看不合常理的文字,得知真相后或许会多一些不同的感受…星野的心理状态其实一直处于某个临界点,随便往哪个方向倾斜都可能酿成危险的极端,正是这种不稳定性很有趣。总之,谢谢你能喜欢他。(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

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I love this bittersweet story and Hoshino is soo cute but I can't seem to get bad end 3.

Please choose the option for MC to express annoyance and a bad attitude while maintaining Hoshino's favorability.Then it will automatically enter that ending.<3

Thank you!!! <3

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感谢游玩!(`*)

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加油加油,很难见到国人制作者在itch上,并且是这种优质作品:D

感谢你的鼓励评论!(*´∀`)

本来想留个言呢,没想到我八个月前居然已经留过了啊啊啊啊啊😎️😎️

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在互联网冲浪时偶然发现了《不治之药》(和《来份夜宵吗?》),然后都浅试了一下,结果一个不小心把结局全通了一遍((  

总而言之,游戏做的真的很好(虽然游玩过程中遇到了一些小bug),剧情也是真的很强,作者辛苦了!!!ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

哇,谢谢你通关游戏和评论!如果发现bug,可以将具体内容发送到我的电子邮箱:frozen-iris@hotmail.com。在我闲下来之后会尝试修改的,感激不尽。(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

This is now my favorite game of all times!! I loved everything, especially the writing!

Thanks for the comment and the like! Your compliments are very touching. (▰˘◡˘▰)

没想到能在itch上玩到国人大大制作的游戏,并且这也是我目前玩过的最优秀的病娇向视觉小说。因为人物心理描绘得非常细腻,剧情也有不少意外的展开,所以我用一晚上打通了它,全程没有觉得无聊过。我还特别喜欢从不同结局里收集通往真结局的密码碎片的设计,最后输入密码的时候简直成就感满满。总之没有玩过《不治之药》的病娇控的人生是不完整的!

感谢你的喜欢和评论!这是一个业余制作的游戏,但我确实是在叙述方式和精简文本下了一番功夫;最后呈现的效果足够使作者自己满意才会发布出来。而你提到了这一点,看到这条评论,我也是动力满满。再次向你表达我的谢意。(*/ω\*)

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I only created this account to comment on how much I love this game! Do you have twitter by any chance? I would like to follow your art, it is so beautiful!

Thanks for the likes and comments! I don't often post my work on the public web, so checking this account occasionally is enough. I've been working on my next game recently and your comments have given me encouragement.(*^w^*)

特别特别的好,特别的好磕

感谢你的评论,我很开心!(*´∀`)

very well written!!! i haven't gotten all the endings yet but it already seems like one of the best vn i have played.

Thanks for playing and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

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I love love love this game Hoshio is perfect. 

I made a video for YouTube translating the game to ptbr I hope it's not a problem :)


Yes, no problem. I'm glad you like this game.<3

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Wow this was so good!! Glad this got an english translation! Hoping the other vn one day also gets an translation(´• ω •`)

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Wow thanks for liking my game. Your comment makes me feel happy.(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

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欺负小狗感觉好罪恶啊!!!喜欢

(^^●)小狗是如此可爱的…感谢游玩。

how I know the password?

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According to the order of bad ending 123 + normal ending + good ending, the ten-digit password is formed. If you're wondering now, 【 https://frozen-iris.itch.io/pasthope/devlog/467858/-160 】has a ten-digit password at the end. <3

ohh thank you so much dear<33

ଘ(ˊᵕˋ)*

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my type of boy <3

oh. Thank you for liking him! (*´◡`*)

can I stream this game on youtube please?

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Yeah, sure. (੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

thank you! I finish all the endings already now I'm confused with both of them, who is the worst but they both have pain they must go to the hospital 

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Haha. It's true that this may be a bittersweet story, but I'm still satisfied with it from the creator's perspective. My initial idea was to write a script that the reader wouldn't find the truth without reading it in its entirety. Thanks for playing the game. (*>◡❛)

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(这是使用翻译器)你好!我真的很喜欢这个游戏,所以我实际上做了一个英文翻译。我在这里问你是否想使用它,如果你想用英语发布游戏。

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Wow, thank you so much for the translation! That's very kind of you. Here is my email addressfrozen-iris@hotmail.com

And, if I post the English version, what name should I sign? Is it okay to sign your username?(*´ ◡`*)

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是的,我的用户名很好用。

另外,我的电子邮件以mooynkeen开头。

编辑:刚刚意识到我的电子邮件可能显示为Doop。

Could you please make an Android version of the game? I really want to play it.

Thank you for liking it, but this game needs some modifications to convert to Android phones. This is a bit hard for me.

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is there any english version upcoming in the future, pls let me know

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Thank you for liking it!

坏结局3怎么打出来啊,打了半天都打不出来,但是游戏超级棒,是我喜欢的类型,没想到在发现这种宝藏病娇游戏,爱你爱你

感谢喜欢和评论!坏结局3的条件是【星野的好感度】且【主角表示烦躁】。最后会自动进入结局。我补充了一个简易攻略,希望能帮到你…(w◝)

呜呜呜,总算打出来了,感谢大大,( ˘ ³˘)♥.

(`*)玩得开心就好

请问在哪看星野的好感度呀TUT

这个是隐藏的代码数据。考虑到星野的性格,基本上只要选择积极回应的选项,他的好感度就会提升 ()

好的呢,谢谢大大

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Finally founed it again (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) I hope there would be English version :'<

Kawaii Panda-chan! I remember your rating. Thank you for liking this game, and I look forward to seeing the English version someday.(w◝)

花了一点时间打完了所有结局,真的炒鸡喜欢好结局的剧情!!!!!收集所有结局找到真结局这样的获取方式真的好有意思!!!!!!如果更新的话希望作者大大能多加一些类似于好结局和纯爱的剧情

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非常感谢通关评论,我很激动!原本好结局确实应该更长,最后的剧本被我删改了一部分,因为想保持简短,留给玩家想象的空间。有时间会尝试制作番外或者续作的,再次感谢你的喜欢!()

哇哇哇作者竟然回复我了,大大用两周时间一个人做出来这样的游戏真的太厉害了!

(˘˘▰)

<3

OMG···非常疯狂,我喜欢这个游戏

感谢你的喜欢和评论!很高兴自己制作的游戏能被get到(^ ^)……

<3

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help. i just read the introduction and i really want to play it. but i cant even understand chinese. i know this is a short game but, can you please translate it to english?  really really really really thank you if you can translate it. here is a heart. 💖. my heart.

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(Sorry, this uses a translator)

Oh my, what a lovely comment! 

Some other friends have said this topic in their ratings. My English is very mediocre, so the only way to translate this game into English is to use a translator.

I am planning to make another short game.But when I have time, I'll probably try to translate them into English.Thanks for your comment!(=ω゚)ノ

i mean, i can help a little bit if you want. my english is not that bad, you know. but im a non-native speaker so sometime i'll struggle a little bit with words. and plus, i have a lot of free times, so i'll be always free to help! (if you dont mind my personality, it's sometime worse than the feeling that your mom found out you had a bad mark on the exam last week. but most of time im a very very good person ofc)

but i forgot the problem that i dont know chinese

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I can't help but feel very happy to see your comment. Haha you have a great sense of humor. Thanks for offering to help me!!(◡✿)

aw sorry for late reply, but no problem, i have a lot of free time anyway

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Hi! I actually did want to ask about if I could translate this to English. I really like yandere games and I've been practicing my Chinese through translating manga.

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Oh, of course! Thanks for your help, I can read English but not good at writing. If it can be translated, I will definitely play the English version. I'm looking forward to it!(˘˘▰)

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